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Daydream
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 12th August 2017 @ 12:46:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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To lie on a hill and watch the sky;
No finer pastime known says I;
Blue lake heaven where eagles run;
Through popcorn clouds buttered with sun.
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softerware
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2017-08-12 00:46:21]
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Re: Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th August 2017 @ 08:05:51 PM AEST
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I like this SW!
but I like rain
to walk through
getting thoroughly soaked
where I can see what is right
in front of me.
You are a wordsmith and this one is great!
Peace!
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Re: Daydream
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 12th August 2017 @ 08:23:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful Jaye
I/'/m with Muppet on this.
Thank you!!! |
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Re: Daydream
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by ingeniusidiot on
Sunday, 13th August 2017 @ 08:11:18 PM AEST
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I agree with James and Muppet..You are a poet thats one in a million and you can and atleast by me..i can consider you one of the greats..right up there with Poe, Shakespeare, and Frost to name a few. Although this was short you spoke volumes and created a beautiful picture of a place that i dont think anyone would not want to visit or live..Great Job Jaye.
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Re: Daydream
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 19th August 2017 @ 05:52:57 PM AEST
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Love it...popcorn clouds buttered by sun....lovely.
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