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The Cut Of Her Jib
Contributed by
ramfire
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Monday, 14th August 2017 @ 03:32:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I do like the cut of her jib
She answers smartly to the wheel
In strong wind she is a flyer.
She kicks up the waves this flyer
As past the boards they go and jib
Its my trick to be at the wheel
I stands me watch this night at wheel
Now sure shes controlled this flyer
Winds strong in the leech of the jib
It gives me hard time at the wheel
In cloudless night shes a flyer
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2017-08-14 15:32:11]
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Re: The Cut Of Her Jib
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 16th August 2017 @ 01:06:45 PM AEST
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Multiple meanings lie within this clever write. Is the she of your topic a sailboat or a lady? There is no doubt she holds your attention, captures your imagination, and is admired for her swiftness and power.
AHA! Perhaps this is why ships are called "she".
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Re: The Cut Of Her Jib
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by Invierno on
Friday, 18th August 2017 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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Everything Soft said. Multi-faceted depending on what light you hold /'/her/'/ up to.
Well done!
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