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Caged
Contributed by
drone
on
Monday, 21st August 2017 @ 11:30:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Tell me
how does it
feel
I would like to know
losing yourself
piece
by piece
day after day
watching
yourself
from deep within
as your life
slowly fades
into a monotonous haze
like a hamster
on its wheel
in a cage
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2017-08-21 11:30:37]
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Re: Caged
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Monday, 21st August 2017 @ 03:22:47 PM AEST
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Hang around.....you/'/ll feel that way eventually.
Good poem.
Mike |
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Re: Caged
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2017 @ 12:43:37 PM AEST
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| Life can be monotonous at times for sure. You captured that truth so well in your poem. |
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