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Unlike You
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 09:28:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Unlike you
I/'/ll never do you any harm
Even though
Thoughts of you will never
Keep me warm
Just the vision of your face
Puts me in a very dark place
Once I had mad love for you
But you wouldn/'/t see it through
It was so easy for you to say goodbye
As if you didn/'/t even have to try
Even though I crumbled up deep inside
You could never take away my pride
At times you made me feel so small
But I always gave you my all
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2017-09-05 09:28:15]
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Re: Unlike You
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 11:32:25 AM AEST
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Ive been in this place so many times whether it was before I got married as well as after. Its still something that I struggle with from time to time because from the sounds of it just like you if something is important to me and means the world to me I will just in with both feet without testing the water first and give it my all regardless. Great write my friend.
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Re: Unlike You
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 06:04:23 PM AEST
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All we can give is our best. That is all we have.
You know of what you speak James; it comes through in your sincere words.
Its important to share. Someone needs to hear this right now!
Your gift is the wonderful hope your poetry brings . We are, by your generousity, not alone.
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Re: Unlike You
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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| The thoughts of how we were treated by those we truly did care for constantly haunt us...... |
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Re: Unlike You
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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| I relate to this. it/'/s lovely. |
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Re: Unlike You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2020 @ 08:49:32 AM AEST
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//Here we are again. I even had to take a deep breath after I read it because I started thinking of my wife.
Great write, TimmyJimmy.
Dugan
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