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Look out Below
Contributed by
softerware
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Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 05:59:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The dead mans name they learned was Morris;
Hikers found him in a forest.
In flippers and full wetsuit gear;
A mask, a snorkel, and a spear.
Every single bone was broken;
But a wetsuitwas he joking?
For Morris had been soundly smacked;
Crushed to death by fierce impact.
They found him clearing brush away;
From the wildfires there last May;
No foot prints led to where he lie;
As if hed fallen from the sky.
Into this clearing in the wood;
At last Forensics understood.
The fire had been extinguished by;
Fire helicopters flying by;
Dumping water from the ocean..
No one had the wildest notion;
That below those azure waves;
Morris chose to dive that day.
He might have easily survived;
Had he but marked his ocean dive.
The headlines said he got his wish;
Poor Morris made the bucket list.
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softerware
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2017-09-05 17:59:29]
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Re: Look out Below
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 5th September 2017 @ 06:39:47 PM AEST
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I feel so bad that I laughed while I read this...
lol. This was crazy good and you my dear need help. lol
This was wonderful..!! |
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Re: Look out Below
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 6th September 2017 @ 08:21:35 PM AEST
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this is an ingenious piece of writing. Although tragic it was very funny, lol. Thank you very much my friend. I needed a good laugh to end my day :)
Rich |
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Re: Look out Below
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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| I could not stop giggling too |
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