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The Happening Part 1
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Monday, 11th September 2017 @ 02:07:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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The sun shinning on a empty billboard in the morn
letting me know a new day had dawned
feeling kinda off but had to let it go
time to get ready for the work flow
Got to work and a worker pulled me to the side
telling me i came to work 2 hours before my time
now the supervisors looking me in the eye
saying there is something wrong with me go home no work tonight
By this time I acknowledge that ok they must be right
no thanks I need no ride l will get home I am ok to drive
10 minutes later I open my eyes
that is when I realized I had rolled the car
as I hear a first responder was saying he is lucky to be alive
cut me out of the car now I am in the ambulance
having trouble trying to breathe
The trooper keeps asking me how much i had to drink
I keep telling him I do not drink but he is not believing me
found out later one of the first responders was drunk
and they thought the smell of alcohol was coming from me
Get to the hospitol got a tempertaure of 102 degrees
finding out I had walking pnumonia
with a prognosis of legionnaires disease
Now I am in a room and my room mate whispers to me come here take a look
I take a look and he giggles as he holds his catheter and blood and urine flow free
I call for a nurse who is not pleased
they were in the middle of ordering chicken wings
I point to my laughing room mate
but the nurse is staring at me
as I start to bleed out from somewhere internally
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Re: The Happening Part 1
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 12th September 2017 @ 08:13:27 AM AEST
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| Waiting for part two....... you have my attention! |
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Re: The Happening Part 1
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 12th September 2017 @ 10:33:06 PM AEST
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Where shall you take us from here??
This is a wonderful start to a great story! Please don/'/t leave us hanging! Chapter two, if you please?
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