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Just Once
Contributed by
Saira
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
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Just once I want to stop these wretched thoughts from coming down so hard on me,
Just once I want to stop this piercing pain from digging deep inside of me.
Just once I want to save my soul from being rotten,
Just once I want to feel whole, not completely broken.
Just once I want not to lie on the bed of needles,
Just once I want to solve all the mind-boggling riddles.
Just once I want to stand upright and leave the swampy ground,
Just once I want to feel good, not so woefully down!
Just once I want to be colourful like the butterflys iridescent wings,
Just once I want them not to have me on a string!
Just once I want to stop the paroxysms of rage,
Just once I want to grapple with this bitter ache.
Just once I want not to drink my own tears,
Just once I want to shrug off all the doubts and fears.
Just once I want not to make any more mistakes,
Just once I want to have a lucky break!
Just once I want to have a good night's sleep,
Just once I want to have some peace.
Just once I want them to let me be!
Just once I want to know; has God listened to me?
Copyright ©
Saira
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Re: Just Once
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:17:46 AM AEST
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| I like your repetative mantra, it adds strength to your words. I wish I could read it again! |
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Re: Just Once
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 06:58:25 AM AEST
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| Lordy! such strength in these words. it made me cry.what more i can say ? |
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Re: Just Once
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:06:20 PM AEST
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just once...it takes a smile...to make the pain
all seem worth while!!!
Yes He hears you!
Angel always..Godspeed!!! joni |
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Re: Just Once
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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Lying on besd of needles and drinking tears.. deep feeling of sorrow...... beautifuly written..
venkat |
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Re: Just Once
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by norm on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:35:23 PM AEST
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Your writing is powerful...i want to help
close your eyes..
turn half way around
open your eyes
maybe all the pain will come out in reverse.
if it works..you'd be happy again
maybe it will work...
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Re: Just Once
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by norm on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Your writing is powerful...i want to help
close your eyes..
turn half way around
open your eyes
maybe all the pain will come out in reverse.
if it works..you'd be happy again
maybe it will work...
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Re: Just Once
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 04:43:02 PM AEST
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When I was a fighter pilot I invented a mental proceedure for putting al my troubles behined me as I walked/ran out to my aircraft..
I imagined heavy steel shutters dropping down on each dorway, ground duties, debts, girl friends, appointments, problems etc etc etc etc leaving me clear to concentrate on the flight and nothing else
It takes practice but the demands of the task in hand make it essential. After a year or so the whole thing becomes automatic as the pre-flight checks take over.
Concentrate on what you are going to do next. |
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Re: Just Once
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by gohar on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:05:48 PM AEST
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Hello and AsSalam,
I like your poems. Don't you have website of your own. Just Once is a nice poem. Please visit me some time.
Allah Hafiz
Ashraf Gohar Goreja |
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Re: Just Once
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:50:27 PM AEST
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This is just another magnificient touch from the deepest corners of ur mind, which indeed reflect the writing abilities in u upto a very high honour!! Congrats!!
Just once I want to leave this busy world in calm and peace.
But no doubt this very line stands no where from ur master piece!! |
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Re: Just Once
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by Chenobi on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:51:39 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. You know very well how to put your feelings into words. Very nice. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 07:52:33 AM AEST
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| its a very powerful poem and shows determination and a cry for help. good work!!! gettin better n better everyday.-----nida |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:40:21 AM AEST
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| Thank you for encouraging words. I appreciate that. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:57:22 PM AEST
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How nice! I'll try.
Thank you for your uplifting remarks. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:02:36 PM AEST
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Okay, you can :-)
Thank you for ur kind remarks. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST
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| Yes, He hears everyone...just likes to take His sweet time though :-) |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:06:21 PM AEST
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Yes, He hears everyone...just likes to take His sweet time though :-)
Thank you Joni! |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:09:43 PM AEST
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| Thank you venkat for your kind remarks. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:16:43 PM AEST
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Waalikum Assalam!
Well no, I don't have any website of my own. I think my talent still needs a lot polishing to shine enough. But anyway, thank you for liking my poems. |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:24:45 PM AEST
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| Thanks Chenobi! |
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Re: Just Once
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 12:54:16 AM AEST
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| LOL. He was so sincere and ardent he posted it several times! |
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Re: Just Once
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 04:13:58 PM AEST
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our hearts and spirit take such a pounding sometimes, i have questioned my God too.
sad, and very beautiful. Crow |
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Re: Just Once
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by Saira on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:59:54 PM AEST
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| And hopefully HE will answer for sure! Thanks for your kind remarks my friend. |
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