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Not
Contributed by
drone
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Friday, 15th September 2017 @ 03:52:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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It is not this body that you see that is me it is I who lives within can you see that is me
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drone
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2017-09-15 03:52:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 16th September 2017 @ 06:49:35 PM AEST (User
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short and deep
good flow
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Re: Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 24th September 2017 @ 07:32:48 PM AEST (User
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What a challenge! What you see is not what you get.
If you were a book I/'/d read you cover to cover just to unravel the mystery of who you are. Your poem is an invitation.
Please confirm my reservation! When you begin opening the tale of who you are, I would not miss it for the world!
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