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Flight of the Robin
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xHeathenx
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Thursday, 28th September 2017 @ 05:34:19 PM in AEST
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Reddish-Orange robin ruffles
Riding through the air
Fly, fly my feathered friend
Like my soul from my despair
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Re: Flight of the Robin
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th September 2017 @ 09:58:02 PM AEST
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xHeathenx, this one just popped up.
It pops!!!
Peace!
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Re: Flight of the Robin
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 29th September 2017 @ 08:35:34 AM AEST
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Great write Heathen :)
I don/'/t want you to fly my friend. Robins always perch on the top rail of an old fence in a farm field.
They puff out their chest with pride and lay their wings aside and later they drop their head and doze off to a calmer place. They are content with their lives.
Be at peace with yourself and find contentment and rejoice in who you are and what you are. Trials and tribulations will always come your way but you have the strength to see them through and being aware of changes you may need to address is half the battle.
So only fly when you want to soar.... You need not escape to be happy.
I enjoyed this and your PM.
All the best to you.
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Re: Flight of the Robin
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by softerware on
Saturday, 30th September 2017 @ 03:58:04 PM AEST
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Robins, the masters of ceremony for spring!
So frail, like us, yet they fly!
This is a wonderful write that rolls off the tongue like a song. And the last line hits home. I love a powerful ending!
Well done, and most enjoyable to re-read for inspiration!
softerware
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Re: Flight of the Robin
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by Durango on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 07:11:09 AM AEST
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Poem wrapped in silken words
and delivered in suede lines.
Beautiful. |
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