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Make Believe to Magic
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 30th September 2017 @ 03:45:41 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Children lose their make believe
We know not where or when;
Whose eyes perceive life undeceived;
And cant go back again.
Weve crossed a line thats undefined
The portal locks behind us:
Remanded to the world unkind;
Whose thunder soon will find us.
So long ago an embryo;
Begat an empty shell;
Left to grow as best we know;
Too soon to do it well.
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softerware
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2017-09-30 15:45:41]
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Re: Make Believe to Magic
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 1st October 2017 @ 10:17:02 PM AEST
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The way some people act, I/'/d say never!
The last stanza is a bit sad but very true!
I dislike childish adults but I admire adults that harbor childhood dreams. |
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Re: Make Believe to Magic
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2017 @ 04:05:28 PM AEST
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Well there/'/s a punch to the emotional belly!
Though I think a failure to become such a shell is likely when we embrace our creative tendencies and sides. Lucky us poets and artists alike eh?
If you would be so kind, check out this video here, because it carries a ring of the bell that you/'/re sounding here, and hopefully you appreciate it.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=9mLdo4uMJUU |
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