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Coming Clean
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Wednesday, 4th October 2017 @ 11:00:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Laying down my gloves
Trying just to love
Washing off the paint
Living with the stains
Turning all these pages
Touching down on better places
Grounding in this earth
Measuring our worth
Breathing through the pangs
Asking if it`s strange
How we`ve come to bare
More soul than lovers ever dared
Forgetting our lines
Stumbling, so blind
Sleeping through the morn
Waking up in thorns
Staying up all night
The longest road, no end in sight
Getting off that ride
Walking now in stride
Coming oh so clean
Feeling oh so free
Nowhere left to run
The battle`s done, look what we`ve won
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MoonlitAngel
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2017-10-04 23:00:53]
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Re: Coming Clean
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 5th October 2017 @ 02:18:24 AM AEST
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| Sounds to me like a sort of appraisal, a recollection of efforts made in regards to a joint effort, like say a relationship, then seeing the payoff and the fruits of the jointed labor. Refreshing in helping us remember that our hard work will pay off in the end :) |
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Re: Coming Clean
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 5th October 2017 @ 08:28:34 AM AEST
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Great poem! The truth shall set you free........
Most relationships could use absolute honesty upfront.......... If not, why even bother? This was very well wrote! |
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