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Always Come Back
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Saturday, 7th October 2017 @ 02:33:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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can I hold your hand for your whole life
slow right down
time`s passing much too fast
can I kiss your face for my whole life
hear the sound
of your voice there at last
can I be someone who`s always there
just outside
I miss you every day
can I be someone who`ll always care
on your side
I`ll never go away
can I always make the time for you
and will you
keep on calling my name
can I always do my best for you
follow through
keep on staying the same
can I still carry you up the rise
run with you
your laughter, my soundtrack
can I not say so many goodbyes
promise you
I will always come back
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2017-10-07 14:33:55]
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Re: Always Come Back
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th October 2017 @ 12:03:16 AM AEST
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beautiful! I would hope this captures
him, a bit of all of us.
I think it does. No, I am quite sure
it does.
Thank you for sharing it!
In the parlance of writing, where caring
means everything, this is Strong!
Peace! |
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Re: Always Come Back
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th October 2017 @ 05:41:46 AM AEST
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I totally relate to this. My wife left me in June.2002. My former step son was like a real son to me. I took him to karate lessons, doctor, etc. I really didn//'//t feel a difference between him and my biological daughter as far as kids are concerned. She let me see him for about a year but then cut off all ties. I was met with resistance and threats of violence, so not really sure brought all that /*****/ on.
I love your poem. That second stanza!!! :(
Sincerely hope it works out for you.
Tim |
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