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Amorous Rebellion
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Sunday, 8th October 2017 @ 05:39:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Quelling heart vexed on choices
Drowned out discontent
Path beset on all sides by wicked seed
Ever more, I ache for greed
Pity and sacrifice can bleed the soul,
Your will to continue, swiftly stole/'/
Pining for some peace of mind
I yearn for it all to just let me be
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2017-10-08 05:39:48]
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Re: Amorous Rebellion
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by softerware on
Sunday, 8th October 2017 @ 09:39:01 PM AEST
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You write of the stage when we are extricating ourselves from a relationship and wish it to just be OVER!
However, as you point out between the lines, healing takes time and parting takes reorganizing and restarting. Exhausting business.
Wise are they that sort it out instead of pouring one relationship over another to avoid the inevitable. Eventually we all have to deal with ourselves. A lesson you already know. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Amorous Rebellion
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 9th October 2017 @ 05:57:04 PM AEST
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Nice!!!
I/'/m with Jaye on this. It was very unique.
Interesting way to look at life in a relationship. |
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Re: Amorous Rebellion
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 10th October 2017 @ 11:46:38 AM AEST
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As stated above love is indeed an exhausting business
but the revolution lives!!!
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