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Scar Tissue
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 9th October 2017 @ 02:35:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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embed yourself in my skin
I`m not scared of your needles
only scared of the pain
counting our scars and our sins
colouring between the lines
just burning in my veins
trace every crease of my flesh
it`s all scar tissue to you
triggering memories
let`s get tangled, oh, enmeshed
one more time, just crashing through
diving deep, falling free
tuning in to your wavelength
all this electricity
makes me feel so alive
holding on with all my strength
all this synchronicity
has got me skydiving
digging my nails in your skin
I`m not scared of the height
only scared of the fall
oh all the places we`ve been
what I`d do to be that moonlight
pouring over your sprawl
injected into my mind
this conviction is insane
still don`t understand why
addicted but I don`t mind
this mix of pleasure and pain
and every daybreak, I die
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MoonlitAngel
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2017-10-09 14:35:45]
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Re: Scar Tissue
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 9th October 2017 @ 05:54:13 PM AEST
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What a great flow and superb word choices.
This was flawless and actually a fun joyful read which may seem weird but it was not a sad at all.
How about "frisky" lol!
Loved it! |
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Re: Scar Tissue
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 10th October 2017 @ 12:43:36 AM AEST
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I really like the way this flowed
keep diving deep.... |
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Re: Scar Tissue
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 10th October 2017 @ 08:36:16 PM AEST
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Why do I want a cigarette?
This left me out of breath. So many great phrases and expressions! WHAT ID DO TO BE THAT MOONLIGHT POURING OVER YOUR SPRAWL.
Smooth rhythm and gait, paced so deftly that the poor reader can never quite catch their breath until the finale!
Exhilarating and vivid.Almost impossible to be seductive and ladylike at the same time--you have succeeded. Software |
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Re: Scar Tissue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2017 @ 01:45:51 AM AEST
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let loose
sitting all the while
just an excuse
to explore
more than wild
to implore
a vividness
seems like such
an unholy experience
that is truly
holy, because it is
skin is never simple
the being inside
is complex
no matter how deep
one thinks they travel
they awake side by side
their warmth
feels real
like nothing else
ever could
could it last
carry them forth
in an uneven world
I think it could
It has happened
before
MoonlitAngel
you seem to write
here
Peace! |
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