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Selling God
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 22nd October 2017 @ 07:36:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Ive never been a joiner;
I like to be alone!
But without an invitation;
Youve shown up at my home.
Its lovely dear to meet you;
How long must you stay?
Im still in my pajamas;
You know, its Saturday
I see you brought your children;
To give your visit sway;
I bet it cures the slamming doors;
And pleas to Go Away!
Im freezing in this bathrobe;
I dont want to be saved;
If you could leave your business card;
Ill take it to the grave.
Yes, I believe He loves us;
It says so on your car.
Nice you neednt take the bus;
Too bad youve walked so far.
For your sake I will overlook;
Your promise that Hell cure;
Everything that vexes us;
(Youre on that list for sure)
You speak of church with urgency;
Like God and Love wont keep;
I know that Im not perfect--
But I am no ones sheep.
You need a course in salesmanship;
Your kids need time to play;
I need to get my clothes on;
And enjoy my Saturday.
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Re: Selling God
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 22nd October 2017 @ 08:31:39 PM AEST
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Crazy good........
Been there and it can go on for hours.
This was so fresh it had to be recent!!!
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Re: Selling God
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd October 2017 @ 12:30:34 AM AEST
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ha ha ha
you hit all the right spots
I don/'/t even want their business card
you are to kind...... |
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Re: Selling God
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 23rd October 2017 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST
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Jaye this is wonderful! Witty, sassy, and fresh with a smile and chuckle to boot at that aside //"joke."//
If I wasn/'/t readinf on my phone at work looking arounf hoping I don/'/t get caught, I/'/d write more, but I/'/ll settle for "I loved it!" |
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Re: Selling God
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by ming on
Monday, 23rd October 2017 @ 11:14:09 PM AEST
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Perfect! My favorite line, I know that I/'/m not perfect but I/'/m no ones sheep.
ming |
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Re: Selling God
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by Durango on
Monday, 14th May 2018 @ 05:38:38 AM AEST
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| No one/'/s sheep indeed, if nothing else the visit gave you some good writing material. |
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