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Sole Soul's Soles
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Monday, 23rd October 2017 @ 08:49:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Recurrence of reoccurring currents of impertinous time
Encumbrence of the burdensome encumbering tide
Innumerable enumerations dictate and calculate
Whilst apostates lure cure prostrate and reprobate
Knee-weak sub-peak esprit pitted against the soul
Snickering bickering internally- pickaxe splitting coal
Discern my hands burning and determine method in turn
And I learn of the will to earn the rewards that I churn
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Re: Sole Soul's Soles
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by softerware on
Thursday, 26th October 2017 @ 05:42:25 PM AEST
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This is a musical dance playing on words that echo down a canyon wall and come back around!
You have shouted down an arroyo and it resonates to sit beside you, reminding us that we are not as sophisticated as we wish to be!
Love the playful, musical sound of your thoughts-- this is actually the way many of us associate words and expressions when we conjure to make sense of our surroundings.
You are closer to defining human logic than you know! Bravo!
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Re: Sole Soul's Soles
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by ming on
Friday, 27th October 2017 @ 09:32:04 AM AEST
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Whoa! Love the last stanza. I feel in my core.
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