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No Comparison
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The_Phantom
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Tuesday, 31st October 2017 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
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Roses die and doves will fly so how do we explain what we feel inside?
Stars can fall and glaciers melt, so how do I express love I felt?
Rivers run dry, clouds can blacken a sky, so what images can I use to show you Im true?
Oceans are salty, and forest burn down, So I cant compare them to the love Ive found,
The sun will burn and once in while the moon and sun do merge, too love is to have courage,
We compare our love to everything, but love it self cant be compared to anything.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: No Comparison
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 31st October 2017 @ 09:25:59 PM AEST
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You make an excellent point and explain why no one can truly advise us on our personal relationships...no two are the same! Your closing line sums it all up...
Like your optimistic sign off too!
Love can be a bucking wild horse of a ride--the trick is to stay on the saddle!
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Re: No Comparison
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 31st October 2017 @ 09:44:25 PM AEST
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This was well done indeed.
Great flow too! |
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Re: No Comparison
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th October 2018 @ 01:18:59 AM AEST
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hello my friend. Its good to be reading you again. There/'/s no comparison to this write speaks volume
to the heart and soul.
Awesome and very powerful
huggs, blessings,
emy. |
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