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A New Day
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Tuesday, 14th November 2017 @ 01:13:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Yellow mountain pines
Bare fox grape vines
The sky is dark and cloudy
But the sun still shines
On hallowed grounds
Summer did retreat
Falling victim to a winter`s defeat
For me life shall go on
While I anxiously await
A new day, a new dawn
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jamesstockdale
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2017-11-14 13:13:59]
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Re: A New Day
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 15th November 2017 @ 04:05:52 PM AEST
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Oh, interesting idea for the change of seasons.
Never heard of fox vines though :o
Serves a good reminder that our changes in ourselves as we grow and develop as people can be just as impressive as those of the seasons :) |
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Re: A New Day
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 15th November 2017 @ 10:08:33 PM AEST
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Your writing always has a hopeful message. The rhythm of this makes it easy to read and sings its tune cleverly enough to dance.
You have summed up hope in the last line: WHILE I ANXIOUSLY AWAIT A NEW DAY, A NEW DAWN.
You have sent us to take a second look at the sunrise tomorrow and appreciate a new beginning.
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Re: A New Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2020 @ 09:37:51 AM AEST
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// Yeah, me likes nature poetry too and this is no exception.
Such a lovely picture painted by the TimmyJimmy.
Thank you,
Dugan
😎
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