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the sky
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 25th November 2017 @ 07:34:03 PM in AEST
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is my wife
the salty
taste of tears
my blood
whispers
fading
absorbed
into skin
quiet because told
your mouth-words
sound wrong
mute because told
your a busybody
withholding because told
you announce
not communicate
this language
bone dust
struggling
white as
the heart
of a star
gone
nova.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2017-11-25 19:34:03]
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Re: the sky
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 25th November 2017 @ 09:55:16 PM AEST
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| this is striking. the second stanza in particular really spoke to me. I could keep reading it over and over |
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Re: the sky
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by Invierno on
Friday, 1st December 2017 @ 09:05:42 PM AEST
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Sublime. Oh, how I missed your angled starkness.
Invierno |
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Re: the sky
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 06:27:51 AM AEST
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Gone nova indeed,
well done |
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