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Contributed by
pat346
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Saturday, 9th December 2017 @ 11:25:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Heart like a pressure cooker
Im calling your bluff
Im falling too fast
Youre calling it off
Spent a day going back and forth
with my feelings
Im spinning, Im drained
Im nauseous, Im reeling
I just want to see you
and your smile that lies
and tells me its real
when I look in your eyes
and I see fascination,
attraction, and hope.
Still falling too fast
Hands burnt from the rope.
Dont call this off baby
Just give it some time
I will do what I can
To make sure that youre mine
but its late and youre out
and Im waiting to see
If what you think about before bed
Is possibly me
I know that its crazy
I know its not fair
too early to say
that I dont want to share
When youre sitting there smiling
and I whisper your name
It hurts to imagine
someone else does the same
I know its too soon to ask
but I swear that Im trying
If I told you I want you
would you think that Im lying?
If I told you I need you
would you think that Im lying?
If I told you I...
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2017-12-09 23:25:59]
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Re: Exclusive
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 07:35:08 PM AEST
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Cool, racy pace. I like what you are conveying here. I/'/ve felt the same way myself, and you did a masterful job of capturing that frenzy accompanying new love.
Hope it works out for you, Man.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd October 2020 @ 09:43:16 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem. Very well written. Keep up the good work |
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