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The Sea Sets Me Free
Contributed by
Stalkee
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
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(1) I walked on the beach beside this gentle sea
(2) Gulls, sun and water made me feel fancy free,
(1) The troubles I had no longer seemed so bad
(2) I gratefully thought of all the beautiful things i had,
(1) This beach is so warm on summer afternoons
(2) Clear sky, infinite horizen, with nature I commune,
(2) I must visit the seas again; I love this gypsy life
(2) The sea was then musical as a fluting pirates wife,
(1) Through all these things nature still hasn't shown me all she can do
(2) A peaceful feeling touched within' my soul and I just knew,
(1) That every little thing was again going to be alright
(2) I walked along the beach and went home to sleep tight
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Stalkee
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2003-06-03 06:05:00]
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:01:12 AM AEST
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Awww, this is wonderful!!!! Great collaboration...More!!!!!!!!
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:41:08 AM AEST
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| Great collaboration you two. :) |
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:46:55 AM AEST
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together you caught the music I feel along the great lake I live by...very good write
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:57:28 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE You both work together well! Christina |
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:25:14 PM AEST
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| WOW! What a lovely poem. I felt like I was actually there:-) U both have done a good work together. Well done! |
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Sexygirl on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:07:53 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely....you have taken all of us on this little adventure too....I really enjoyed this.... |
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:08:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful!! Bravo bravo. You two did this perfectly. I want more more more
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:28:37 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, from two top poets, you do work together brilliantly
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Re: The Sea Sets Me Free
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by angelrae on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 12:07:32 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. I too love the sea and all that is captures. Thank you for sharing this poem, |
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