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The Struggle
Contributed by
Shadowman
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Sunday, 10th December 2017 @ 04:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The fire of pain, it licks my skin
as the taste of blood soon starts to begin
to fill my mouth, and plague my mind..
Its clear to see..I/'/m on borrowed time.
Day to Day the light grows drab
as the strength of will that I once had
Slowly begins to ebb away
as I struggle to keep the thoughts at bay...
"Forget the past, just end it now!
How can you believe that isnt how
your life was supposed to be?
That what? You were meant to just be free?
Please..spare me your platitudes and just cry Woe is me."
NO!!!
I scream to myself with all that I can muster
clenching my fists defiantly while my face is visibly fluttered
My mind it rages, my heart it breaks,
I think to myself is this really my fate?
Copyright ©
Shadowman
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2017-12-10 16:18:10]
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Re: The Struggle
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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You gotta keep fighting
and releasing that silent scream
it helps to get that pressure loose |
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Re: The Struggle
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 01:29:52 PM AEST
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Well done shadowman. there/'/s always going to be some primitive or primordial piece that is just wanting us to believe that, and so the important thing to do is to take that idea or that claim, and say "Maybe it would have been, but with all that I/'/ve done and built for my self with meaning, I/'/ve given my self something better than what I was given."
That will always come but with your defiance and your struggle, it will often leave. If it wasn/'/t for the pain when it chooses not to leave, the joy of when it does wouldn/'/t be as sweet. |
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Re: The Struggle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd October 2020 @ 09:47:44 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem. Very well written. Keep up the good work. |
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