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Bittersweet Sentiment
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
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Bittersweet Sentiment
If you could only see into my mind,
Would you still think the same of me?
Would you turn away from me like all the others do?
All youve given to me will just be taken away.
All I can breath is all you are.
Dont leave me now that youve shown me what love really is.
Dont pretend youll catch me only to watch as I fall.
If only you could see into my mind.
Then you wouldnt ask for the answers you will never find.
I wish I never met you.
You changed everything I thought was true.
Have I changed everything you thought you knew?
When will this all end?
When did it begin?
How can I escape the never-ending cycle that Im in?
How dare you pretend to care.
What gives you the right to mislead me and say youll be there.
You never were, you arent now.
What gives you the right to say you know me?
No one knows me.
You do not know me.
Run away from me.
Be free of me.
You dont need me anymore.
Dont pretend to care anymore.
Ill try not to care either.
Stop living your lie
Its time for me to say good-bye.
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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Written with such conviction!!
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:44:38 AM AEST
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Yay! Another Great write Riki!!! LOts of emotion, i liked it!! Keep writing twin! Luv ya lotz-Lisa
(yea, in case ur wondering, we're twins) |
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 10:44:40 AM AEST
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Yay! Another Great write Riki!!! LOts of emotion, i liked it!! Keep writing twin! Luv ya lotz-Lisa
(yea, in case ur wondering, we're twins) |
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:17:45 AM AEST
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Well done!!
Michelle |
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:03:14 PM AEST
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| very interesting...."if you only could see into my mind"... i have wished too that this could be, that another might see my reality......... ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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This tragic theme is played and replayed over and over again on YPDC and is non the less
painfull to read about. Yours is one of the most touching I have read.
I wrote a poem "He's not the only one" in an attempt to give some comfort and hope to people going through this situation. Although the "scar" will always be there, it is possible to get over it.. Your closing lines show you are already half way there.
A really well written poem straight from the heart.
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by Jacquelynne on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 02:28:28 AM AEST
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| hey! that was a good poem....keep writing... |
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 04:38:19 PM AEST
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WOW! We seem to be able to relate to each other. I've been through and just last year did I finally say goodbye. If he was going to toy with me, then he was a waste of my time. Luckily with time he grew up and we are now JUST friends.
That was incredible.
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Re: Bittersweet Sentiment
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:42:37 PM AEST
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