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They Call Me Patches
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Tuesday, 2nd January 2018 @ 11:20:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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They call me patches;
I have patches all over me.
On my arm, on my leg,
and on my forehead, you see.
Yes, they call me patches;
I have them from head to toe.
On my back, and my chest,
and any bare spot, they go.
Yes, they call me patches;
I/'/m covered from north to south
But, i still
have a cigarette in my mouth.
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nightwolf
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2018-01-02 11:20:41]
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Re: They Call Me Patches
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2018 @ 07:37:33 PM AEST
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Gwan patches, you sound like a brother in another land m/
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Re: They Call Me Patches
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2018 @ 07:55:42 PM AEST
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nicely written. Addiction is persistent - might as well make light of it with poetry.
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Re: They Call Me Patches
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by softerware on
Sunday, 7th January 2018 @ 02:33:28 PM AEST
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What fun! I was bopping merrily along picturing a vagabond, or a clown, or some poor soul in a hospital bed...and WHAM! Your last line upended my perceptions! The very best of story telling!
In humor, there is a message here: When you are absolutely certain you know the story (the person, the situation, ) ask WHY just one more time.
The goal is to draw the gun from the holster before pulling the trigger.
softerware
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