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Letting go
Contributed by
PoeticSkyBeam
on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like the flower that grows
My love grows as well
I look out doors
To see that time has clearly pass
I am still where I am
Like yesterday before last
With my heart in my hand
Not giving it to you
Because you don't feel the same
It hurts
But I must let go
Like the petals
That fall to the ground
With out a moment's notice
Tears turn the cloud
Mid gray
That I will never understand
Until this hurt fades away
I'll let my heart follow
When someone else enters
Just know that these feelings I held were true
I don't think you understood
Now I'm sitting here blue
Good-bye
Copyright ©
PoeticSkyBeam
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2002-08-06 13:34:28]
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Re: Letting go
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:22:21 PM AEST
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This is such a sad write....
Lasca |
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Re: Letting go
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 04:46:59 AM AEST
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| We all must learn to let live and let go, but its so much more difficult to do than say. Very sad, good write. |
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Re: Letting go
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by PoeticSkyBeam on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 10:06:19 AM AEST
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| hi thank you, i guess i was going through a sadness at the time i wrote it. =) |
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Re: Letting go
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by PoeticSkyBeam on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 10:07:37 AM AEST
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| hi thank you very much...... life is difficult but it's much happier once a person lets go of another person. |
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