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Awaited return
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Friday, 2nd February 2018 @ 03:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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as i hold onto the memories of you
i wait for your return
for i truly feel the loneliness within
misery loves company
yet solitude isn/'/t demanding
a never ending battle
between my heart and head
that wouldn/'/t end until you come home
to start over again with you
is worth it
to watch and wait
by the door
for your return
is worth it
to see you again
after all this time
with always be worth it
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
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2018-02-02 03:06:25]
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Re: Awaited return
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 05:37:41 AM AEST
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I think that you should write
I know someone who is close
who watches movies
homemade movies
So luxurious, fraught as though
once something once was,
beyond any love, some
makeshift material thing,
perhaps a food that they call
a feel good soothing tool,
A glass of wine, some
way to forget, what was
once the opposite intent
might seem more than
trivial, as it always was.
to easily think now, or
not, not to think.
It/'/s just a brain.
So write. Do more
than that.
I have no idea what
I am saying here.
She was my sister and
she lost her grandson.
We all did.
Peace!
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Re: Awaited return
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 5th February 2018 @ 12:20:51 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful. My emotional arousal was strong when i read it. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Awaited return
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:54:59 AM AEST
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A gem of a line hit me perfectly between the eyes
"Misery loves company"
How true that is""
Glad I took the time to read.
Steve |
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