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The Writers Toolbox
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 06:33:40 PM in AEST
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These are my crayons;
I choose the shades.
No one but I
Shall color my page!
This is my music;
My souls holy grail;
Carboned by strangers;
Who know where Ive failed.
These are my scissors;
To shape what I am;
What falls to the floor;
Forever be damned.
This is my pen;
Who tells all my tales;
Whos truth is the scabbard;
On which Im impaled.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2018-02-03 18:33:40]
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 06:54:02 PM AEST
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I love the first stanza and of course the others as well. Sometimes the 3rd stanza is me :(
Great flow too!!!!!! |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 4th February 2018 @ 04:04:25 AM AEST
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Great flow indeed
the last stanza is me
weeeeee |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 5th February 2018 @ 12:25:11 AM AEST
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| Softerware, your work is always interesting and enjoyable. I loved the rhythm and the message in this piece. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by ming on
Monday, 5th February 2018 @ 11:07:30 PM AEST
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That last stanza truly rocks!
ming |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 9th February 2018 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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Dear Soft
Not an easy one to get. Non the less worth reading a few time. It/'/s good to have determination as long as that determination results in purpose. Believe in your self always. Shade your pages as you wish for beauty is in the eye of the beholder or one man/'/s meat is another man/'/s poison. Just because that is true dose not mean one has failed all it means is the wrong audience was reached.
So no failed to admit. Just just brilliance in your own right.
Great write
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by WellEyeDo on
Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 04:43:43 AM AEST
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| This came across very cleanly. Very easy to read and grasp. The concept is very alluring as well. Very Much enjoyed this work. Never stop molding that which is you. |
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Re: The Writers Toolbox
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by Durango on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 05:27:33 AM AEST
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Crayons, music, scissors, pen; all the tools a writer needs and you use them in a visually honest way.
This poem should be marketed if it hasn/'/t been. |
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