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Addicted to Love
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 11th February 2018 @ 05:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Rushing to love; in all her disguise;
Embracing deception; believing the lies.
Grasping for feelings we cannot deny.
Hoping were wiser the longer we wait;
Embittered by love that dares to come late.
Blowing the ember that burns in our hand;
Cursing the weakness we dont understand.
Tempted by memories softened by time;
We question the gift-wrap; yet open the wine;
Succumb to illusion, and sign on line.
Coming to terms with a burning desire;
Watching the lonely who dance on the wire;
Consumed by the drama of yesterdays fire.
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Re: Addicted to Love
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 11th February 2018 @ 06:07:32 PM AEST
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So true my friend. The fear of loneliness will make many sell their souls to the devil. Many people want what they want and with material things they may get it. But real love can/'/t be bought. One shouldn/'/t try to either.
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Re: Addicted to Love
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 15th February 2018 @ 10:48:34 PM AEST
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Dear Soft
This time all I can do is Salute your brilliance awesome true poem.
God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Addicted to Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:03:10 PM AEST
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| for some reason I don/'/t fully grasp, the line "We question the gift-wrap; yet open the wine" really struck a chord for me. this piece has great flow, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Addicted to Love
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 05:06:58 AM AEST
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Love
a memory
something I use to yearn
but now I fear
ha ha ha |
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