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Phantastic Dance
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Monday, 12th February 2018 @ 01:33:58 AM in AEST
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My eyes play tricks in the night;
sitting in a dark room,
light streams under the door,
upwards it fades into the dark.
Phantoms waltz across the floor;
and o/'/er the stream
their foot falls fade into the light,
appearing dimly as they slowly
twirl back into the dark of night.
So slight, the visibility
of their shapeless silhouettes,
I strain to see the lovely
dancing illusion before me.
Copyright ©
nightwolf
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2018-02-12 01:33:58]
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Re: Phantastic Dance
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 13th February 2018 @ 09:24:48 AM AEST
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Great write.
The light underneath the door, spooky! |
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Re: Phantastic Dance
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by softerware on
Friday, 16th February 2018 @ 03:47:30 AM AEST
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Ghostly flickers of whispy illusions often come to escort us off to sleep. This is a Netherland you speak of, where reality is being suspended and we are slowly lowered into the coma of dreams.
A bit spooky with the light under the door! Is something coming in or going out?
Yikes. Chilling little read to think over! Thank you!
softerware |
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Re: Phantastic Dance
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th February 2018 @ 05:20:37 AM AEST
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Awesome writing
peace,
emy |
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Re: Phantastic Dance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 12:08:28 PM AEST
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corneal perfumes
gases leaving freely
dancing in closed
room for time
a photon like
all the rest
hoping to leave
their mark
the dark room
exposes the light
onto film
I have a digital
camera
and still I
view each clip
in a dark room
the black darkness
of the room
and
the light
likeness
of rhododendron
that coexist
with her
special smile
I like it.
Peace! |
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