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Ancient Mists
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Wednesday, 14th February 2018 @ 03:38:52 AM in AEST
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Smoke curls in multi colored clouds;
rays from setting sun shine through
as if through a glass prism,
producing only the darkest shades
of purples and blues;
almost black, they shine dimly
on ancient boneyards,
calling demons from their semi lucid dreams;
raising of half rotting stewards,
monstrous worms still eating flesh,
clinging to bone with jagged teeth,
smiling as they look on
with sickly green neon pupils.
O! Hideous dead,
called to rule my static pulsations;
I deemed thee unwelcome
long ago.
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nightwolf
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2018-02-14 03:38:52]
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Re: Ancient Mists
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by softerware on
Saturday, 17th February 2018 @ 05:26:27 AM AEST
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I think you have managed to paint a nightmare. You have CALLED DEMONS FROM THEIR SEMI LUCID DREAMS...and described a chilling scene.
I would go further into detail, but I do not wish to have bad dreams tonight!
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Re: Ancient Mists
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by FireStarter on
Saturday, 17th February 2018 @ 11:41:51 PM AEST
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| Amazing! |
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Re: Ancient Mists
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th February 2018 @ 05:06:14 AM AEST
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Well done.
Blessings/
emy |
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Re: Ancient Mists
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 04:39:31 AM AEST
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the ancient worlds mixed with
the Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin Shelly...
the places we never see in the void
of now mixed in with history
" O! Hideous dead,
called to rule my static pulsations;
I deemed thee unwelcome
long ago"
I suppose the dead had their reasons
diminished long ago
in darker days
or possibly now, it is the living
who should bespeak of their
forebarence somehow
Peace! |
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Re: Ancient Mists
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this! great imagery, I didn/'/t have to work at visualizing it and near the end I was legitimately disgusted so good work evoking emotions! |
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