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BLACK WORLD
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 04:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Living in a black world ,
on a black planet,
spinning in black space
going around a hot sun.
That`s out of control .
Because of lose soul,
whose sole goal is to destroy our world.
One planet, one world, one soul.
Yet we refuse to behold,
it`s not us in control.
But others who use this world,
and its system to remain in control.
But a light has come for all to see,
there`s a better way-OUT for you and me.
For all who has been beaten down ,
this light is love sent from higher ground.
To teach us how we should live and love,
respecting each other is true freedom and love.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2018-02-19 16:18:04]
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by softerware on
Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 07:49:09 PM AEST
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A message of hope for all. Aside from our race, religion, or gender, first we are human. We make mistakes and struggle with our differences. But we all need to be loved and accepted. Such a simple
wish. Such a difficult answer. Such a meaningful message in your splendid writing style for all of us to ponder.
Love costs us nothing to give - why do we withhold it?
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by WellEyeDo on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 02:00:38 AM AEST
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The lack of understanding. The dismiss of brotherhood among the world. A tragedy. How man can be so cruel. I wish to see change, I strive to help light that change.
Well written, I enjoyed the read. |
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by nightwolf on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:32:36 PM AEST
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| Without love, life is a relentless tide of sorrow. I enjoyed this. Well written |
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 05:00:10 AM AEST
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wow friend, It/'/s been awhile butt I/'/m happy to be back. I/'/m amazed to behold at your writing is a masterpiece I/'/ll will write stories to catch my friend and fans up
I/'/m going slower than use to but I needed to go slower. U sure have been doing something different /'/cause I see a miraculous change from the first word to the last in your write here.
hugs, blessings, luv,
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 05:00:16 AM AEST
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wow friend, It/'/s been awhile butt I/'/m happy to be back. I/'/m amazed to behold at your writing is a masterpiece I/'/ll will write stories to catch my friend and fans up
I/'/m going slower than use to but I needed to go slower. U sure have been doing something different /'/cause I see a miraculous change from the first word to the last in your write here.
hugs, blessings, luv,
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Re: BLACK WORLD
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 02:23:30 AM AEST
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good flow
great topic
Hidden knowledge and deception rule.... |
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