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Survive The Dark
Contributed by
WellEyeDo
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Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 02:34:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Brother I hear you in your silence
The suffering done in quiet
You can survive the dark
Sister I see you in your hiding
The pain that your denying
You can survive the dark
And though it all feels so hopeless
Alone in a world of noises
Clutching broken moments closest
Hope hasn/'/t abandon you
Not all hearts are carved from stone
A beating just bitter cold
Let go of your winters
When you pray for summer rain
If you afraid of drowning
Give me your hand
And I can keep you safe
Because I have navigated those roads
Where everything is deafening
In your head memories scream
Your heart left broken
Searching for some way out
overwhelming questions
They never stop nagging
How can anyone understand
When youd sell your soul
For just a passing of sanity
Still here I am
Just a stranger with an ear to lend
Concerned I keep an out reached hand
Because I know it all to well
The feel of the burning
When you walk through miles of hell
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 02:13:14 PM AEST
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| Powerful and real, people are experience thing that they don/'/t know how to deal with, and I appreciate you trying to help. I love this write. |
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 06:51:48 PM AEST
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| this is lovely, very inpsiring |
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by nightwolf on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:29:23 PM AEST
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| I loved reading this. Very powerful. Well written |
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 08:39:29 AM AEST
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| Another masterpiece. |
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by softerware on
Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 05:46:43 AM AEST
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My favorite line is LET GO OF YOUR WINTERS.
You are willing to help others carry their burdens.
I hope they learn from you to carry their own with grace and patience.
We are so unkind to ourselves; so unforgiving.
Your poem is of hope and endurance, and the light at the end of darkness. It is an embrace. One heart reaching out for another.
In a cynical world this is so refreshing.
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd March 2018 @ 08:58:07 AM AEST
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Such great writing.
blessing,
emy |
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Re: Survive The Dark
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by Durango on
Thursday, 15th March 2018 @ 06:21:56 AM AEST
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| Inspiring to many of the plights we go through. Positive. Great. |
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