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Unwritten
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:42:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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An unwritten poem
is as a beautiful maiden
laying dead
on a sheet of paper;
a single drop of ink
falls into her veins,
coaxing the first feeble
pulse of her heart.
One more drop,
two,
three,
it/'/s beat strengthens
and she rises,
prepared for her grand ballet;
each prance and twirl
tracing every word,
every line;
choreographing her beautiful tale,
until the last drop of ink is spent,
and she collapses
into the period at the end
of the final stanza.
Copyright ©
nightwolf
... [
2018-02-20 19:42:37]
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Re: Unwritten
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 11:06:14 PM AEST
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This is delightful! What a clever premise you offer us in this poem.
Your own words fairly dance across the page, making your analogy probable.
The closing stanza was perfect to your tale. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it!
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Re: Unwritten
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 03:39:36 AM AEST
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Well done
Blessings,
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