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APPLE IN YOUR EYE
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 28th February 2018 @ 07:57:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When our souls and hearts touch
The earth quakes moving
mountains to any place.
Come my darling let"s
set luv free changing our universe
You and me, hearts fly free.
I still wonn,a , luv you hold you
be the apple in eye
on your love rely, soothe us when life cry/'/s
I just sit here day in
day out, nothing but dogs
and critters about.
Let/'/s get of this merry go round
Let luv flo that/'/s pure; and sound.
Who cares what anyone thinks
cause from luv/'/s fountain we shall drink.
Let/'/s make peace with our.
hearts that/'/s been cold too luv
.flow that/'/ true and strong.:
an apple a day keeps
the dr;s away
Copyright ©
emystar
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2018-02-28 07:57:21]
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 28th February 2018 @ 11:28:29 PM AEST
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This rings some familiar notes for me. My favorite line is.. Let/'/s get off this merry go round.
It does seem an endless circle when love takes a vacation. I like the reference to dogs and critters about..it helps me frame your surroundings, and sets the stage.
Sometimes as writers we leave too much to the readers imagination!
Thank you for this lovely and enticing plea. Who could possibly resist?
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 01:52:17 AM AEST
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oh Edith making me blush
good to have you back
I missed you |
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 10:15:26 PM AEST
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| Great write. You only live once, go for it. |
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by Waynster on
Monday, 5th March 2018 @ 11:30:18 PM AEST
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| Nice write Emy!! |
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:49:34 AM AEST
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As usual, I loved the write and am glad to be back on site to ready it after what seems like forever.
Being a brit, it always makes me smile to see the word "critters" in a poem.....so you didn/'/t disappoint on that one, or anything else come to that.
Keep flowing out those words!!
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Re: APPLE IN YOUR EYE
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 03:02:19 PM AEST
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Oh Emy, I love the dogs and critters shout out, but this is such a moving and joyous write all around!!
You have a way with words and your poetry is synonymous with ypdc to me.
Thanks for the role call! ;) Little motivator, you.
Hope youre well.
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