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Idle
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Sunday, 4th March 2018 @ 07:14:57 PM in AEST
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I let night swallow me whole,
giving myself entirely to the void;
a strange solace
in the waning of my soul,
leaving me beneath the absent glow
of a new moon,
blind to it/'/s waxing light;
the colors of the lonesome night
lost to my eyes eclipsed
as the voices whisper
through the movement of my lips
words without meaning,
while apathy resigns me
to idle daydreaming.
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2018-03-04 19:14:57]
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Re: Idle
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th March 2018 @ 09:36:14 PM AEST
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| Daydreaming is an escape and in that respect good. Nice write! |
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Re: Idle
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by softerware on
Sunday, 4th March 2018 @ 11:13:08 PM AEST
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Your write describes anesthesia perfectly, although it isn/'/t about that. Daydreaming is healthy and rejuvenating. Almost as beneficial as sleep!
I like the comparison of drifting off to the waning of the moon. Your poem casts a lovely glow as well!
Why am I sleepy?
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