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Consensus
Contributed by
softerware
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Monday, 5th March 2018 @ 01:07:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Men are linear, goal-defined;
Women see things side to side.
He goes to buy;
She goes to shop.
He is quick; she is not.
He is swifter to the goal;
She walks along the edges;
He has no need to see the whole;
She must test all the ledges.
He takes the shortest road to end;
She wanders every shadowed bend.
He speeds her up; she slows him down;
Back and forth until theyve found;
An ending somewhere in between;
That absent one was unforeseen.
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Re: Consensus
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th March 2018 @ 02:34:00 PM AEST
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Great write, my friend. I think most every one can relate.
huggs,
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Re: Consensus
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 11:46:42 PM AEST
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I love this one, Jaye!! Your rhyme schemes are as sharp as ever and I see you still have an incredible knack for delighting the reader with your often observational work.
Well done.
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Re: Consensus
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 24th April 2018 @ 09:41:40 PM AEST
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Well written. Men and women are suppose to be different, there in lies the attraction and the learning.
It/'/s the difference that is intriguing. |
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