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Go In Peace
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Tuesday, 6th March 2018 @ 05:08:33 PM in AEST
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Let no bell toll
when in quiet peace
I lay encased
by six walls of polished pine.
Let me drift unannounced
into worlds beyond
pain and shadow;
in serenity unending
where I go to find the secret
of life beyond life,
and if such truly is.
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2018-03-06 17:08:33]
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Re: Go In Peace
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 7th March 2018 @ 08:06:35 AM AEST
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You raise a curious unsolvable secret! The only way to discover if there is life after death, is to die.
We got the short end of that deal!
My favorite line is LET ME DRIFT UNANNOUNCED INTO WORLDS BEYOND PAIN AND SHADOW. Let us hope we all do so!
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Re: Go In Peace
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 08:07:39 PM AEST
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Well, Im morbid. I really like:
//I lay encased
by six walls of polished pine.//
Lovely! :)
I also like the curious tone of your words, and that you dont talk in absolutes, yet you leave the reader hoping for a place devoid of pain and shadow. Well done!
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