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Furious Stomach
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Tuesday, 6th March 2018 @ 05:11:41 PM in AEST
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Eyes watering;
I struggle to brace the dam
holding back the acid lake
churning in my gut,
threatening to spill over
into my mouth.
A night of pure torment
and misery,
unable to rest my head
for more than a few seconds
at a time.
Hell hath no fury
like acid reflux!
Copyright ©
nightwolf
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2018-03-06 17:11:41]
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Re: Furious Stomach
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 7th March 2018 @ 08:01:51 AM AEST
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This cracked me up! I can relate for sure. That is why adjustable beds are so popular!
There/'/ a huge market share for products like Prilosec, and the over 60s generation is the target audience.
If this write is any indicator of the work you do when I can/'/t sleep --- I wish you insomnia!
Well done. Bravo.
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Re: Furious Stomach
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 04:39:11 AM AEST
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| Ouch! A wonderfully painful write!!! |
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Re: Furious Stomach
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 07:42:16 PM AEST
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I wonder what the statistics are on ulcers and the like with writers...Probably off the charts! Somehow still preferable to writers block...Oh, woe is me and my furious stomach! ;)
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Re: Furious Stomach
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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Sorry for your pain..........truly I feel it as I sometimes get the same!!
I always liken my body to a badly built car with some of the stupid things it does.
Great write
Steve |
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