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Archetypal Architecture
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 05:55:24 PM in AEST
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I am paint, I am art
I am stone, I am metal
Archetypal architecture
I am music, instrumental
I/'/m a friend, I/'/m a stranger
I am caution and I/'/m danger
I/'/m a former and a shaper
I take life and then elate her
I am lively, I am spritely
A death-defying dance
I am whimsy, I am passion
An extension of romance
(There could be more but that/'/s it)
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Re: Archetypal Architecture
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 06:31:26 PM AEST
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Nice free form peppered with some rhyming.
Really love that second stanza, great lines!!
~Moms Spagetti :) |
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Re: Archetypal Architecture
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:31:06 AM AEST
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I/'/ve often heard the phrase
"Publish and be damned"
However, in your case that should read...
"Publish and be praised".
Glad you took the decision to put this up for all to see.
Marvellous
Steve |
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