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Mind Shuck
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 06:22:17 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Most things perceived as a threat
Guarded stance so no regret
Like water taking shape
Memories making waves
Crashing down, and it wont let
Me catch my breath nor forget
Reliving every rape
All the tears and close shaves
But if I could, you can bet
Hit a button, press reset
Each mental cut and scrape
Perverted things one craves
Every tear shed and night sweat
Turn fear into an asset
Wear courage like a cape
Free all your little slaves.
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hauntedscorp
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2018-03-09 18:22:17]
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Re: Mind Shuck
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 06:55:08 PM AEST
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So beautifully written but very sad.
Focus on those here that missed and love you.
You made my day and I pray you are here to stay.
I hope life treats you kind and that you know this is your second home. I/'/m so happy you are back!
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Re: Mind Shuck
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:28:51 AM AEST
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There are some wordsmiths I look forward to seeing and reading every time I come on here.
It has been a while, too long I think......but glad I/'/ve read your work yet again.
Truly inspiring
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Re: Mind Shuck
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 08:18:51 AM AEST
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That second stanza!!!! I/'/ve got no words. Some humans are the lowest life form.
Powerful, Scorpendous!!! |
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Re: Mind Shuck
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by softerware on
Sunday, 11th March 2018 @ 01:39:34 AM AEST
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How I have missed your poetry!
This thunders with powerful emotions and hits us like a hammer. It is a reminder that life can be like that.
Writing can reveal us, and you have never been shy to speak your heart. I hope you will stay and share your gift with us again.
Your work is unique and sincere. So rare.
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Re: Mind Shuck
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th March 2018 @ 09:29:02 AM AEST
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friend this a awesome write
Its full of wisdom.
Blessings
emy |
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