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Dark Monster
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Wednesday, 21st March 2018 @ 05:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I/'/ve spent my life chasing shadows,
So that they don/'/t chase me.
Whenever I look in the mirror,
I will not believe what I can see.
Flooding my ears with music
To drown the voices in my head.
I am afraid of the evil monster
Hiding inside me; not under my bed.
I/'/m tearing myself apart from within;
Trying to fight against the odds.
What makes it even harder is,
Knowing that I/'/m better than I was.
Watching sunset flames consumed,
By the quickly growing darkness.
Reminds me how things change;
And shows me how I/'/m helpless.
I don/'/t want to hurt you anymore!
Nothing means more to me than you!
You are last bit of light in my life!
But my darkness will kill this, it/'/s true!
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2018-03-21 17:24:41]
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Re: Dark Monster
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by softerware on
Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 06:02:58 AM AEST
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A vivid tale of self destruction from the inside out.
Your hero has surrendered to his fate. The more he/'/s forgiven, the worse he gets.
What will save him? You leave us to guess..and our imaginations run wild.
If this is RUSTY...I am looking forward to your future writes.
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Re: Dark Monster
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 07:24:02 AM AEST
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Nice.....
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Re: Dark Monster
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:32:40 AM AEST
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If that is rusty I want to see your writing at its peak.
Good work.
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Re: Dark Monster
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:32:44 AM AEST
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If that is rusty I want to see your writing at its peak.
Good work.
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Re: Dark Monster
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 31st March 2018 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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this speaks to me so much. I feel every single line as though they came from inside me. especially when I got to "What makes it even harder is,
Knowing that I//'//m better than I was." - that was like a punch to the gut.
get out of my head and heart ;) |
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