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Kissing in the Rain
Contributed by
Durango
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Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 03:08:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Showers of warm emulous waves
March upon us like Russian soldiers on parade;
Our souls escape into each others place,
absent to the torrent scene
As desires arise inside the rain.
My shirt is painted on your blouse,
Kissing in the sweet release below the clouds;
My lips chase your lawless mouth
And capture you time and again
As desires arise inside the rain.
We hold a moment unencumbered by the clock
Within this whim of day unlocked,
Kissing in the rain between the light and dark
Leaves nothing of us to contain
As desires arise inside the rain.
Copyright ©
Durango
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2018-03-22 15:08:55]
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Re: Kissing in the Rain
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 03:31:09 PM AEST
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I just had a cold shower..........
Awesome write! |
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Re: Kissing in the Rain
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by softerware on
Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 05:14:26 PM AEST
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I like the repeating theme as it gives a rocking chair rhythm to the tale.
My favorite line is MY LIPS CHASE YOUR LAWLESS MOUTH, although there are many stunning descriptions being born here.
Yo have come as close to erotica as the magnetic draw of desire itself.
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Re: Kissing in the Rain
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 02:53:00 AM AEST
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bravo, now take bow.
blessings,
emy
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