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Too Soon Goodbye
Contributed by
softerware
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Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 07:44:44 PM in AEST
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A knock at the door
Who stood there but Death
Hed been here before
For others and left.
Where will you take me?
Heaven or hell?
He laughed and said slowly;
Mark my words well:
You neednt fear your destiny;
Theres nothing left to tell.
Im the last youll ever see;
And I ended where I fell.
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softerware
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Re: Too Soon Goodbye
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 22nd March 2018 @ 08:59:01 PM AEST
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Uh, well this ain/'/t so reassuring...
Please say it isn/'/t so....
Lovely write as long as I don/'/t dwell. |
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Re: Too Soon Goodbye
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by Durango on
Friday, 23rd March 2018 @ 05:04:34 AM AEST
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| Death is an interesting topic. That great unknown. We accept things that make us more comfortable about it, like a heaven. If your poems were a golf swing you/'/d have a smooth delivery. Maybe death is a hello? |
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Re: Too Soon Goodbye
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 01:05:51 AM AEST
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Very strong, thought provoking write.
I too hope this is just another artistic write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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