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JUMP
Contributed by
softerware
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Friday, 23rd March 2018 @ 03:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Chose to cling to safety;
And watch life from your shelf.
Not knowing what you could be;
No need to test yourself.
When our ship is going down;
We learn that we can swim!
Or live our days in fear well drown;
Too scared to lose, to win.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2018-03-23 03:22:00]
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Re: JUMP
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by Durango on
Friday, 23rd March 2018 @ 05:11:02 AM AEST
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| Excellent point. And you wrote your point without the cliché, no guts no glory, bravo! I/'/m hooked on your themes, and your poems are concise without sacrificing flavor. |
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Re: JUMP
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 12:56:12 AM AEST
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Awesome.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: JUMP
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by nightwolf on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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| Never trying is a worse loss than trying and failing. the willingness to leap is what truly gives life purpose. Good write |
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Re: JUMP
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 10:33:23 PM AEST
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Damn straight. What do you have to lose?
As a kid I was taught to stand on the sidelines and I later proved that theory was worthless.
If this poem doesn/'/t pump up the meek nothing will! Much wisdom here! |
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Re: JUMP
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 26th March 2018 @ 02:35:45 AM AEST
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The truth is said to free us, this piece proves that point.
Well done
The Phantom |
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