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COMES TO MIND
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 12:22:34 AM in AEST
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Society don/'/t bother me at all
I/'/ll just show them, if you
ever call.
Lonely is no place wonna be.
So please come to me.
When the thought of you
comes to mind, The tears
melt my heart every time.
Still You are so far away, luv
These magnetic beams
shine from. above.
My country friend likes
me a lot but baby he aint
got what you got.
so far, its just been
words on a page
real life isnt just a stage.
So tell me now,what
are we donna do? I need
luv thats long and
totally true. Tell me
some thing before I go
Please, I just need you so.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2018-03-24 00:22:34]
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by Durango on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:02:11 AM AEST
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| Like your title. The longing of a lover is always a good subject. Your poem seems like a song that could be put into many genres. It would be fun to tack a chorus on that piece. |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:13:24 AM AEST
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Oh smoking hot hot hot
love is simply beautiful... |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 10:25:39 PM AEST
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Can I have your number? :)
Great write indeed. If the receiver doesn/'/t come running after this, he is a loser! |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 26th March 2018 @ 02:29:29 AM AEST
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Ah yes my dear friend, it seems like forever since I have read your words. Talented in rhyme another beautiful piece.
Thank you for sharing
The Phantom |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 04:41:20 AM AEST
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Dear Emy
How nice to read you again it areas for ever.
The longing of love is a good sign. For those who have stopped longing have stopped living. This is an awesome piece you have here would make for a sweet country song.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 04:43:13 AM AEST
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| Seems for ever. Typo lol |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by allforyou on
Saturday, 15th September 2018 @ 07:03:08 PM AEST
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my favorite part:
When the thought of you
comes to mind, The tears
melt my heart every time.
Still You are so far away, luv
These magnetic beams
shine from. above.
love that. this attraction u felt for someone who it seems they may have been far away...i just picture two ppl as magnets on opposite sides of the country that attract each other despite the distance.
- Kara aka allforyou |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 10th July 2019 @ 10:28:48 PM AEST
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Hey Kara,
Sons got my laptop working on it, I/'/m gonna get another one and I/'/ll get back with you. Nice to hear from you.
Love,
emystar |
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Re: COMES TO MIND
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by reprobate on
Friday, 27th September 2024 @ 07:51:45 AM AEST
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| Love the emotions and the desire.
Hopefully life will be kind and receptive.
Beautiful write. Miss your words!
Thanks for sharing this!
Reprobate |
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