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Yesterday's Places
Contributed by
Durango
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Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:24:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing at the beginning
Wandering how to begin;
Yesterday I walked where I pleased
But that was then.
Should I know her? Should I know him?
Surroundings are vague as are these faces
But I dont remember my joys and pains
In yesterdays places.
So, I begin what I have begun,
Repeating what I said just moments ago;
Trapped between confusion and lost,
Can you tell me who I am, if you know?
To my loves, my friends and my life.
I greet you as if we just met each other;
Please think of me as I was,
For, I do not recall our moments together.
My peaks have eroded, creating a canyon,
Hold me close to your heart
For those fleeting times
When I remember you again.
Copyright ©
Durango
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2018-03-24 04:24:41]
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:52:58 AM AEST
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Wow, you did a great job with this write. Its so when this happen to any one.
blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:52:59 AM AEST
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Wow, you did a great job with this write. Its so when this happen to any one.
blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:53:02 AM AEST
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Wow, you did a great job with this write. Its so when this happen to any one.
blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 04:53:04 AM AEST
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Wow, you did a great job with this write. Its so when this happen to any one.
blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by nightwolf on
Saturday, 24th March 2018 @ 06:47:34 PM AEST
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| So sad. Great write |
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Re: Yesterday's Places
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by softerware on
Sunday, 25th March 2018 @ 02:17:44 AM AEST
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This is exquisite in its razor sharp inside- looking- out view of dementia.
You demonstrate a keen ability to immerse yourself in others to be able to describe so vividly what you have not experienced.
You have spoken of this illness with tenderness and compassion. I suspect that you are not easily deceived and are a man to be reckoned with.
Well done.
softerware
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