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Frozen
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Sunday, 25th March 2018 @ 09:44:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Suspended moments
seal the bricks and stones
in the foundations of my solitude;
memories standing still
in the full moons gleam,
as a distant dream
hovering on the edge
of thought as I rest
cozily in delightful illness.
Each tap on my door
rings like the smack
of a sledge on a church bell,
cracking the foundations
with it/'/s horrid vibrations;
quaking my spine
and disturbing the stillness.
Quietly I sit waiting
-no answer forthgoing-
for the disruptions abating.
Copyright ©
nightwolf
... [
2018-03-25 21:44:11]
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Re: Frozen
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by Durango on
Monday, 26th March 2018 @ 04:52:35 PM AEST
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You/'/ve allowed a window into the anguish that overtakes
the mind. The metaphors are excellent. |
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Re: Frozen
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 27th March 2018 @ 02:06:25 AM AEST
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Insightful for those like myself who have no real clue the struggle many go through.
Great write! |
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Re: Frozen
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 31st March 2018 @ 12:42:56 AM AEST
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| this speaks to me on a deep level, I relate to every single word. it/'/s presented in a very creative way. well done. |
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