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Mourning
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Thursday, 29th March 2018 @ 05:53:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I was a natural disaster
couldn`t see my violence coming
ocean waves crashing ever faster
wicked heartbeat`s sinister drumming
didn`t know that in starting over
I might be a stillborn tragedy
mo(u)rning comes and we just roll over
slowly dying of this malady
used to find hands to hold anywhere
now this loneliness is choking me
was screaming out in all my nightmares
now the joy between has broken free
I see my colours fading to grey
feel my mad dash slow to a crawl
can`t even hear the music that plays
I miss the thunderstorms when quiet rains fall
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MoonlitAngel
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2018-03-29 17:53:13]
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Re: Mourning
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by Durango on
Friday, 30th March 2018 @ 04:32:37 AM AEST
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| I like the alteration, and the even flow of you descriptive piece. |
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Re: Mourning
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th March 2018 @ 06:34:22 AM AEST
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Good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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