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Pink Panther
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 10th April 2018 @ 01:43:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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walking like the pink panther
is what I do and how I feel
as I am taking a stroll
minding my own buisness
not bothering anyone
I am just grooving on a good flow,
confusions always lurking
but I
aint falling down that rabbit hole
as I stroll
because I am in control
to many people are stressing
always talking
never taking the time to listen
I qualify to ease their minds
but when I tried
it was hypnotizing chickens,
the Illusion that they are winning
are so absurd
as they continue the cycle
that keeps them losing
again and again
it never ends
well I think Ill just keep on strolling
a chill factors
in control now
as I take in the view of world
and how it works
I can feel
that there is still love all around,
brother wolf is howling
and sister moon glows
from all the chemicals...
the world may not be perfect
but it is the only one I know
and today
I am in control.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
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2018-04-10 01:43:32]
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Re: Pink Panther
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 10th April 2018 @ 05:12:31 AM AEST
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| A true message. You are in control. We do need more listeners than talkers. |
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Re: Pink Panther
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 10th April 2018 @ 09:18:59 AM AEST
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| Got the spring in your step. Observing only as why bother? People always losing.... Exactly I get it. I/'/m with you..... Great write. |
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Re: Pink Panther
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 11th April 2018 @ 06:22:51 PM AEST
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I so enjoyed this conversational style! Your poem speaks TO us and not AT us. The last stanza is my favorite, and the message is clear. We need to do what we can with what we have, and life will never be perfect. But that doesn/'/t mean it can/'/t be wonderful!
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