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Harvest
Contributed by
Durango
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Monday, 16th April 2018 @ 06:14:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the first season
I was a seed in soil,
In the second season
I grew through sweat and toil.
In the third season
I stood patient and wise,
For in the last season
I was harvested for paradise.
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Durango
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2018-04-16 06:14:11]
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Re: Harvest
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 16th April 2018 @ 02:35:23 PM AEST
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Lets hope so.
An intriguing write for sure! |
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Re: Harvest
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 17th April 2018 @ 03:55:27 AM AEST
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you said a whole lot with very few words
good flow
well done |
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Re: Harvest
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 03:11:54 AM AEST
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Cryptic. The reader fills in the analogy, and that is seductive to the intelligence. This is an invitation to write with the writer. The table is set, and the offering can be a snack or a five course meal!
May we all be harvested for paradise - a great line reminiscent of Soilent Green!
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